1. Hemingway’s Rules When Ernest Hemingway was a cadet journalist at the Kansas City Star he was given a style guide that included four basic rules he committed to memory. Apparently they served him well for the rest of his life. They are:
Valid points all.
2. The Lead The first sentence or two of the opening paragraph or a stand-alone introduction, the lead is the most important part of the story. It needs to grab the reader’s interest and persuade them to read on. If you’ve come this far, it means my lead worked and you wanted to keep reading. Thanks for sticking around.
3. Get to the Heart of the Story You’ve written the lead and a great first paragraph, now what? Time to write the story. Now is not the time to bore readers – when is – so get to the heart of the matter and the best way is by using structure. And the best way of doing that is by . . .
4. Who, What, Where, Why, When and How Who are you writing about, what happened, where is it, why did it happen, when was it, how was it resolved? These are all important questions that your reader will want answers to. Having this simple structure is a great way of avoiding writer’s block and it helps with the next point.
5. Flow Articles that move seamlessly from one logical point to another are easy to read and will hold the reader’s interest. Keep it flowing and keep the reader.
6. Show Don’t Tell There is no better way of involving the reader than by using quotes. Quotes give the piece authority and authenticity and stop the piece from being a lecture. People want to be informed and the best way is through quotes. They are also great for leads and endings.
7. Style Style comes with experience, so keep writing and your’s will develop. Don’t try too hard because it will sound forced; don’t try to be fancy or sound incredibly well-educated with the hope people will look up to you; they’ll see it from a different perspective: you looking down on them.
8. Keep it Tight If a word or sentence isn’t contributing, get rid of it. Can you say in one sentence what you’ve just said in two? That paragraph that doesn’t seem to be working or fitting in obviously doesn’t – cut it. Write in the ‘active’ voice. Or, you may find that you like writing in the ‘passive’ voice, as it is more suited to you and your style and what it is that you are writing about. Nah, write in the active voice.
9. The Ending If your article is coming to a close, end it, don’t try and push on. There’s usually a point where all is said and done and it’s time to leave. Find a good quote that ties it all together or draw a conclusion from what you’ve already said.
10. Edit Edit, edit and then edit it again. It’s amazing what you find the second time around. Read aloud what you’ve written and see how it ‘sounds’. If it sounds right, it is. A good trick is to have a short break at the completion of the first draft and then go back and clean up the obvious problems. Then, if possible, leave it for a day or two and go over it with fresh eyes and do your final draft.
You may find initially that your changes are many. With time, you’ll be getting closer to the mark with your first draft but remember, a piece will always benefit from editing. On saying that, don’t fall into the editing trap. At some stage you’ve got to submit it. Three drafts are usually plenty.
Important point: editing as you go stops the flow. Keep writing and ignore the underlines on misspelt words and grammatically incorrect sentences. Turn those features off in your preferences if you can, at least while you’re writing your first draft. Keep writing and worry about polishing later. Or, alternatively, write the first draft on a typewriter. A typewriter is a very beneficial tool as it makes you think before you write and you can’t edit as you go.
Here are a few more quick points:
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